gym law mom is right, judges can take 3-6 tenths in the choreography of the routine and the "composition" of the routine. Since it's only level 7 and her first pass is a layout, the best thing i can think of is to focus on the amplitude of the layout and the position in the air. im not sure what a strong level 7 fx routine would be so i don't know if she gets deducted for composition of her routine. is her routine the same as everyone else's at meets? is it harder, is it easier?? um, another thing would be to focus on the form in the air in every tumbling pass.
apart from the tumbling make sure every leap hits 180 degrees with perfect form, make sure the turn is toe to knee (or toe to ankle, however your coach teaches it) and that she is not stumbling out of it. she needs to show off her dance and add expression in her face. eye contact with people always makes the routine look really good. i think if she is only 9 it could take her a while to grow into her choreography.. heck it took me till this year to realize that smiling actually looks normal in a floor routine and im now 16. practice it in front of a mirror helps her see for herself. um this might be going overboard, but i actually got dance lessons from a dance teacher (and continue to take them today) to help my dance, its REALLY helped. however dance is also something i really enjoy so its not like i was complaining when i signed up.
for further inspection on what deductions she has, video tape her meet. we have one of the sony touch screen video camera where i can play it on the TV in slowmotion. its really really really helped me be aware of my gymnastics in the area of what i needed to improve. also we have cameras in the gym so we can see what we are doing wrong both in exectution and technique.
also remember that judges base their scores on the actually execution and technique of the routine and much as the do the impression that it gives them. make sure her dance is really fluid and leaves the judges saying "wow how can you NOT give that girl a good score"
finally upgrade, upgrade, upgrade. these days judges are looking for the girl who can do her routine the cleanest, but also who can do the hardest routine in the cleanest way. i don't know if you have time seeing as states is only 3 and 1/2 weeks away. but if there is something that she can add that can also help
these are only suggestions basing it off of the fact i don't know your daughter, best of luck to her at states!!