Women Bar routine deductions

[zoe<3]

Hi im a first year platinum and have been receiving super low scores on bars! I was possibly wondering what the deductions could be

One major deduction i know of is my flyaway. But other then that im not really sure what else to fix please tell me things I could improve on and if you can give drills that might help!
Thanks so much

(Sorry I had to put the routine in two parts the file was to large to be uploaded all as one video)

 

[Pricess_leia]

Take my corrections with a grain of salt, since I am neither a coach nor a judge. And please other people correct me if I’m wrong, but I think that every time you do an extra swing even just your legs it is a .2 deduction. I think I saw 3 or 4 of these. A few other things I saw were not fully extending on your kip, general rhythm deductions, slightly low clear hip, and a couple bent arms. Hope that helps!

 

[Gymgirl84]

It is the pauses after every kip mostly, also probably the angles in the casts and the free hip. Those are certainly the most costly, then there are some minor ones, but not stopping after kips could give you at least 1.0 more.