Coaches Help understanding scoring in junior elite floor routine

[DP gymnast mom]

Hi are there any coaches or judges that can help me understand the scoring of a recent floor routine for a junior elite routine?

 

[DP gymnast mom]

Hi are there any coaches or judges that can help me understand the scoring of a recent floor routine for a junior elite routine?

 

[Gymgirl84]

My evaluation:
Front tuck step out (A)+Round off (A)+FF(A)+double pike(D)
0.1 low chest in landing
0.3 big hop
0.1 additional step
0.1 additional step
Switch full (I would only credit as a switch half, so C)
0.3 body shape
0.1 height
0.1 precision
Split full (C)
0.1 body shape
0.1 precision
Round off+ff+double pike (D)
0.1 height
0.1 feet
0.1 chest in landing
0.1 underrotation
0.3 big step
Double turn (she hopped before completion, so downgraded to a full turn, A)
0.1 out of balance
0.1 precision
Switch leap (B)+tour jete 1/2 (C)
0.30 body shape switch leap
0.1 height switch leap
0.3 body shape tour jet 1/2
0.1 height tour jete 1/2
0.1 precisión tour jete 1/2
Round off+ff+back layout 11/2 (C)
0.1 crossed feet
0.1 legs separated
0.3 step

D-score
2D, 4C, 1B, 1A 2.30
ERC (all fulfilled) 2.00
No CV
D-score 4.30

Execution deductions (stated above) 3.6
Artistry deductions 0.7
Body posture 0.1 not bad, but could be a little better (chin up)
Poor foot work 0.1
Amplitude of movements 0.1
Involvement of body parts 0.1 (she mostly does movements with arms/legs needs to involve torso, hips, head,...)
Complexity of choreography 0.1
Expression 0.1/0.2 (hard to judge from the vid)

E-score 5.8

OOB deduction: I think it was 0.3, but I'm not sure from the vid if both feet went out.

Final score: 4.3+5.8-0.3 = 9.8

Maybe I was a bit harsh, or maybe she scored in that range. She has a lot of deduction on the dance elements, if I was her coach, I'd do the minimum amount, probably only the dance series + the split full that was the best of the dance elements she did. Could maybe keep the turn if she usually hits it well.
Acro is mostly ok in the air, but the landings were very costly here.

 

[DP gymnast mom]

Thanks so much! Very helpful! She stepped out with one foot only, so 0.3 or 0.2?

The judges were even more harsh for this competition as apparently (according to the coach) they were asked to be. They actually gave her a 9.2.

Coach said this was way too harsh and is disputing it. The coach agreed that she deserved between 9.8-10.0 as well.

 

[Gymgirl84]

If she went out with one foot then it's 0.1, so it would be a 10.
Anyway, sometimes the judging criteria is harsher for everybody, and it is more or less within the rules to have a 0.5 difference between judges, especially when we're talking about 4 points in penalties, so a 9.2 is maybe a little low, but something like a 9.5 would be in range with my score.