The issue is probably little things like watching her feet on the casts when the judges go by the lowest point. While the bar routine has potential it shouldn't score a low 8 anywhere. She got .1 on her kip swing, probably a deduction on the kip finish, .3 on the cast, .5 at least on clear hip (low and arms bent), .3 second kip, .2 arms, .3 extra swing, .2 high bar jump and swing, .3 cast too low, .2 arms on low swing pullover, .2 rhythm, .2 dropped underswing, a deduction on both swings for shape, and .2 for the flyaway being under the bar.
I'm not a judge but I can see these things as a coach. Even with generous scoring which tends to happen when they don't take as many swing deductions on the kips, she would have a 7.5 maybe.
BUT the good news is she could have a low 8 by casting higher, not doing an extra swing before her squat on, and not hitting the floor. The other changes to go from the 8 to the 9 will be more technical and harder to make. But focusing on those easy changes for the next chance meet should get her to the 33.