Off Topic New poem. I wrote it.

[united team girl]

Unknown heights

I wait and wait and there I go,
Jump out there but I start out slow.
Picking up speed
Hoping to take lead,
I go higher and higher
Feeling weightless
All eyes on me
Hoping to see
A winning smile,
While my life depends on this.
Nobody knows how I feel,
Making my way through the floor
Will I stick it or land short?
Almost done,
Here it comes
I feel my body sink,
But stand tall.
Smile, salute, wave,
These are the moments I crave


Plz tell me what u think. It came from the heart

 

[blondegymnastxo]

Your poem was really great
As i was reading it i was able to picture what you were saying in my mind

 

[gracefulone]

Nice job; I really like it!

 

[Robindq]

that's a great poem! i wish i was creative enough to write poetry! Haha but i fail at it!
I get such low marks in the poetry unit for english.
But I loved that poem!! The last line totally ties everything together, and is so true!

 

[xleahcarx]

good job, i like it.